Monday 6 November 2017

NaNo '17 - Part 4

Main character intro 3 of 4
Pace is a little more low key than the previous entry, but I'm trying to build up things up quite slowly.

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 – Alice –

‘Hi, this is a message for Alice Hussein. It’s Mark Sanders here, I’m calling from U&U Properties about your latest payment. If you could call me back on the main number as soon as, that would be great. Speak to you soon, thanks.’
‘Message received Wednesday, 24th September at eleven thirty am. To listen to the message again, press one. To save the message, press two. To delete the message, press three.’
Alice stared down at her mobile, the only thing casting light in her dark front room, and slowly reached for the red icon to end the call. She had put the phone down to hear the message, rather than hold it up to her ear. It felt easier to listen to bad news from a distance. She slumped back on the sofa and flopped sideways into the thin duvet. 

 It was a day or two since she had started sleeping on the sofa. It wasn’t a very good one, but the bed frame was broken, and she wouldn’t be able to get another one for a while. And there was the damp.
The window rattled. The wind was up again. Probably no more sleep tonight, then. Work was less than three hours away. Alice rolled over and pulled the duvet up, burrowing her head down into the pillow. She hugged a cushion close to her stomach and curled around it. No doubt she would feel the cramp later, but the chill in the air was pronounced.
The wheelie bin lid lifted and dropped in the next gust, and Alice snapped one eye open. Her phone screen was shining once more, and she rolled to face the light. Swiping down, she scanned the header of the email, and suddenly realised that her heart had been pounding in the seconds before she saw her mother’s address. She took a steadying breath, rolled back into the blanket and switched to the full version.
‘Alice, sweetie, I’ve been meaning to email for a day or two but, what with the flight and the heat, dad and I were just a little worn out, so I needed a little while to get my head back into gear and onto Oz time. So frazzled! You know how it is, barely any leg room in those cattle-class planes, and it’s not exactly a quick hop over the Channel. They serve these horrid little plates of rice and slop and I don’t know what else! I mean, I know food doesn’t taste right at that altitude, but it’s like they’re not even trying! And the prices for drinks! Good grief…’
Of course, Alice thought; the time difference. Her mother hadn’t realised it was the crack of dawn in Britain. Alice read on.

‘The weather’s amazing! You’re really missing out, but I know you couldn’t get the time off work. Aunty Ann send her love and wishes you could have been here with us all. She popped the cake on the slow boat in August, so all being well it should be with us in time for Chrimbo. I’ve mostly spent time down by the pool – I’m hoping my tan will be better than Aunty Ann’s by the end of the month. Just lounging about in the sun, it’s been glorious, though I’ve missed my favourite daughter loads and loads.’
Alice scoffed. She was her mother’s only daughter, though she did feel herself smiling. She could hear the words clearly in her head.
The text continued. ‘Though, you’ve never had trouble with your tan, of course. I don’t feel like we’ve had enough time together lately, and I’ve got all sorts of things saved up for when we get back. Maybe a nice spa weekend? You loved that one we had down in Bath a few years ago, didn’t you? Well, let me know when you get some holiday time in the new year, alright?’
Alice closed her eyes and remembered. The light of the screen bled through her lids. Yes, that weekend in Bath in 2022. First year out of uni, Alice had been sending CVs and applications every hour of the day, mum had insisted. ‘You’re so focused you can’t even enjoy the summer! Come on, pack a bag and we’ll shoot off tomorrow, okay? You need the rest!’ She’s been glad to go, but still took her laptop with her and leached wifi wherever they went. At lunch in the Pump Rooms, it sat on the table, like a third diner. In the evening in the cocktail bar, she left it popped open and they got drinks brought out to them. She would have taken it to the Thermae if there wasn’t the risk of it falling in the pool. Spas weren’t really Alice’s thing. The soothing music actually made her want to scream. Give me punk or electronica over this, she thought, although she kept the sentiment to herself. Nor was she really up for much pampering. It was do it yourself, rather than get someone to do things for you. That was how her dad saw it. She was daddy’s girl, really. Always had been. Of course, she loved her mum dearly, and her brother – when he wasn’t being a dick – but it was dad that she gravitated toward. She opened her eyes and looked back at the email. There hadn’t really been any word of dad, yet, so she scrolled on.

‘We’ve got loads planned, of course, but your dad insisted on making sure he knew the way to the ground from Aunty Ann’s. I mean, the place is signposted, and it can’t possibly be that hard to follow directions, right? All he has to do is flag down an Aussie, exclaim that he’s here to see England get trounced in the Ashes warm up, and they’ll be only too glad to direct him, right?’
Alice smiled again. Yes, that was dad, alright. He’d always had this mad desire to fit in when he was young. Grew his hair out, listened to goth, and then the one rebellion that actually raised eyebrows; he started supporting the England cricket team, instead of Pakistan. She was fond of her grandparents, and loved the atmosphere of good natured bickering and teasing whenever the two teams clashed, but had always wondered if they resented her father for this choice. This trip had been a dream of dad’s for years. They were in Oz for two months, with tickets for the opening game at the Gabba.
‘Anyway, I’ll send pictures once we’re back from the game. If you manage to pop by the house, could you water the plants? Love to Zack if you speak to him before we do. See you soon, love Mum and Dad.’
She let the screen fall dark and rolled over to face the back of the sofa again, but kept hold of the phone, as if through it she was closer to mum and dad. She thought about calling; she needed to hear their voices, but she had no idea where abouts they were in their day, or if they could take the call. Besides, her credit was low. Just like the that call she needed to make to the letting agency. They’d have to call her back.
Tapping the screen on again, she located the button for the radio.
 

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